Posts Tagged: Brandon Sanderson

Plots, outlines and the right thread for a great novel

I have been doing a lot of reading recently about plotting and scenes as I add more and more detail to my current project, Godsent. I like to have a number of different manuscripts going at once to ensure that whatever mood I am in for the day, at least one of my projects draws my attention. Godsent is one that I just cant stop thinking about.

During my reading I found a great post about outlines and plots which provided some interesting take on the different levels of plot a writer often uses. Although I often use a similar approach I have found writing a short synopsis works well. The synopsis, written in flowing sentences allows me to be drawn away with the story and let the ideas come together.

Similar to Brandson Sanderson’s approach to writing I don’t start with one spark and end there. Yes, most of my projects start with a simple idea and grow until I have added sufficient background material and plot threads that I can start to lay them out on the weave which eventually becomes  a good (well I hope great!) story.

Right now I have the first 2-3 page synopsis which is my plot, a first high level cut of scenes and some character descriptions. Over the next few weeks I am going to build out the rules and backstories for the world-building which is so important in a good fantasy novel. Once I am happy with the depth of material to draw from, only then do I hone in on which thread should I tug to make the story.

Godsent is one where I thought I knew which thread I wanted, but this evening while waiting for my daughter to finish orchestra, I had a great idea which may end up changing the plot of the book completely. And this is exactly why I love writing

 

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Foreshadowing vs. Telegraphing

Rachael Gardner, one of my favorite Literary Agents, and avid bloggers recently posted a great blog entry on her website. I admit I read a lot of agent, and author blog posted (after all I believe that you need to be an avid reader first, before you can become a writer), but it just so happened that I was in the final few hours of finishing the Mistborn series by Brandon Sanderson (which I HIGHLY recommend btw), where a lot of Sanderson’s foreshadow started to be revealed.

I’m not going to add any spoilers here, but perhaps it was the just the serendipitous timing of Gardner’s advice, and Sanderson’s skill at the craft that really helped me realize how powerful foreshadowing, when done well, can be — I almost drove off the road (I typically listen to audiobooks) amidst a mental barrage of ‘oh my god, how could I have missed it; It was so obvious‘ memories.

Perhaps that’s the real skill in foreshadowing — putting something right out in plain sight that you are not hiding anything, but you leave it to circumstance in your writing (remember the odd adage of writing: show, don’t tell) where a particular scene unveils the connections for you like a mental flashback (think of The Sixth Sense, or The Usual Suspects if you need some movie examples too).

Telegraphing, on the other hand, doesn’t make the inferences subtle enough — you can reach out to the end of the book, and form that unveiling scene in your mind way before the author wants you to.

So, hats off to Rachael Gardner for a great, helpful blog entry, and extra big kudo’s to Brandon Sanderson for pulling of the difficult task of foreshadowing, and doing it so well.

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Can you have too many ideas?

Ok I admit it: I have a problem. I can’t help coming up with new novel ideas. Aside from The Seed of Hope, The Talent Tree Chronicles, and potential prequels I have been sketching out the storyboard for a more ‘epic’ fantasy along the lines of Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson etc. This series would be targeted towards an older audience, set in a new universe, and shopped to publishing houses such as TOR, and Knoff.

For now, I am about 20% through the 1st draft of Of Worldly Deeds, book 2 in the Talent Tree Chronicles which will take me another few months to finish writing then 6 months to edit, and I can take a breath before book 3.

I can’t shake this idea of the other fantasy series though. It is at the stage where I am waking up at night frantically scribbling notes, or leaving voice notes on Evernote while I am driving… The characters need to be released!

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Lamenting Robert Jordan

I was lamenting Robert Jordan’s passing today (yes I am aware it was some time ago now) and have to admit mostly from a selfish perspective – what happens in book 12 of the Wheel of Time series? I miss turning the pages (actually truth be known I do most of reading via audiobooks while I am running or travelling for business) and pouring over his fantastic mastery of the written word.

As with all things there are positive and negative outcomes. The positive is Brandon Sanderson, another favorite writer of mine who also writes for Tor-Forge (my dream publisher – although my current publisher, who I can not name yet for contractual and marketing issues, rocks too!), has been tasked with completing the series.

Sandersons site is one that I regular troll through, reading blogs and marveling at the immense depth of creativity and discussion. I am very glad he has picked up the mantle and is completing the series. Now I just have to wait…..

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Two Boys. Two Lives. One Hope.

Devon Grove, home to the magical talent tree, and it's incredible talent apples, is in trouble. One bite could change the fate of the world. What would you do if someone took that away from you?

This Time Hope Alone Isn’t Enough.

Almost a year has past since the fateful Talent Day. The Prophecy appears to be coming true: the weather is growing hot, the seas are rising, and ash begins to fall. Charlie, and his friends must use all their Talents to stop the Seekers.

Death. Intrigue and Old Age. Everything being a God shouldn’t be.

Being a God isn't everything Satisfaction thought it would be. True, souls are immortal, but host bodies are not. When time is on your side, you can afford to make some changes.